Jurassic World: Camp Cretaceous
-Revisions-
* Panels with Purple Squares include my revisions. *
Notes: The director requested I restage this sequence and asked me to plus the acting between Yasmina and Sammy. Specifically, to highlight their liking for each other, and comfortability together. Also, showing a more ‘cozy’ feel and environment when they join the other kids.
Notes: I was asked to primarily plus the acting here. Some subtle acting of Mae being optimistic, hopeful, thinking she got through to Kenji, before we cut back to Kenji saying “He’s too trusting.” Sprinkling more emphasis on this moment.
Notes: The director requested highlight Yasmina’s crush on Sammy. Emphasize how Yasmina knows her so well, and how she realizes her feelings for Sammy are growing.
Notes: I focused more on the acting for all the characters in this revision, while upping each characters poses, to emphasize their personality.
Notes: The director requested an acting and clean up pass for this scene. I also restaged most shots and personalized the poses for characters.
Notes: I was asked to plus the acting in this scene. Emphasizing Yasmina and Sammy new relationship, and how they’re a little happier, more giggly towards each other. They’re excited that they’ve found this solution with one another!
Notes: I focused on the staging and acting in this scene. Varying the kids’ positions, avoiding them in a straight line, and emphasizing how worried they’re feeling, and visually indicating how small Darius feels. Also, highlighting how Darius is struggling with his decision.
Notes: The director requested I focus on acting between Brooklyn and Kenji here. Emphasizing the cute, sweet love for one another, after all they had been through, and getting so close to that moment, before being abruptly interrupted.
Notes: This was a clean up/ acting pass. I was asked to include shots of the kids running tot their families, highlighting how they’ve been waiting for this moment for so long after what they had been through, while sprinkling in a moment with Kenji finding his new family.
Notes: I was asked to clean up and clarify where the characters were in this scene. To also maintain a cinematic feel, and plus the acting on all characters.
Notes: I focused primarily on the acting and clean up in this scene. I emphasized the positions of the characters and how the previous situation had effected them.
Notes: I was asked to clean and plus the acting in this scene. Both subtle and big acting between the characters and their dilemma to get to safety.